tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4238689632552621935.post3685410400560951814..comments2010-09-22T07:57:25.093+02:00Comments on r y m d k a n i n e n: E-writing assignment 2Isabellehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15800305969166429020noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4238689632552621935.post-36792865451807907652008-08-03T19:31:00.000+02:002008-08-03T19:31:00.000+02:00Hi,You've really managed towrite in a dialogue for...Hi,<BR/>You've really managed to<BR/>write in a dialogue form.<BR/>Both of them was really good,<BR/>but frankly spoken the last <BR/>one was best. <BR/>July, 2008, Nillagunjorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05055436864351376756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4238689632552621935.post-72298643393377834642008-07-30T09:28:00.000+02:002008-07-30T09:28:00.000+02:00Hehe, that last one was great!You did a really goo...Hehe, that last one was great!<BR/><BR/>You did a really good job in gradually letting the scenario unfold until the end when we realized Bart was an old man in a wheelchair. Oh, and this quote just made my day:<BR/><BR/>"I'm like the stalking cougar, when I see my prey, I switch to auto-mode. It was pure instinct, I swear."<BR/><BR/>Keep up the good work! ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4238689632552621935.post-55051967164851188652008-07-29T22:51:00.000+02:002008-07-29T22:51:00.000+02:00I really liked your dialogues. They were both good...I really liked your dialogues. They were both good in language as well as taking the stories onward. Great work!Jimmy Nordenfelthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12953556491980538925noreply@blogger.com